Friday, January 30, 2015

Famous Last Words for Week 3

This week was a pretty long one. I spent the entire weekend in Texas for a speech tournament, which was a lot of fun. My speech coach went to graduate school at The University of North Texas, and knows that I want to go there for grad school as well. So, since we were in the Dallas/ Fort Worth area he took us to Denton to explore and eat some awesome food. We always eat amazing food at tournaments, my favorite eatery from this weekend was in Arlington and it was called Prince Lebanese Grill. It was delicious!

Japanese was pretty hard this week because we are learning a lot of tricky material. However, I am getting the hang of it, and I feel like I will do well on our exam that is coming up on Monday morning. Intercultural communication is also going well, we had to pick groups for a group project yesterday, and that’s always a scary process.

My favorite writing this week was my storytelling post. My only issue was, that what I wanted to do was much too long for me to actually do it, so I had to abridge it and do a shorter period of time than I had originally planned on. So I will need to keep watch over that issue for future storytelling posts.


I spent a lot of time working on speech over the week as well. I am leaving in a few hours for a speech tournament in Kansas. During the spring semester we are gone nearly every weekend for tournaments. This one is pretty short though, and we will be back Saturday night. That will give me all day Sunday to finish up homework and study for my Japanese exam. Plus I will be able to sleep in on Sunday, which is awesome because speech tournaments are exhausting work where you have to be up by 5 am, and usually don't go to bed until midnight the night prior. Last weekend we had to do that two days in a row due to how the tournament was structured. So wish me luck, I am hoping to do very well!

Below is my delicious dinner of lamb, rice, and hummus from Prince.
Image Information:personal photo of food from Prince; photo from January 2015.

Wednesday, January 28, 2015

Storytelling for Week 3: Of Mobs and Mercenaries

Mercenary for hire.

That’s what everyone called him, except for maybe the man himself.

Checking the address before he entered the building, Sugreeva smoothed out his pinstriped suit to make himself look more presentable.

When he entered, a large man sitting behind a counter looked up to meet his gaze from beneath a fine black fedora. He was intimidating.

“I am looking for a man named Rama.” Sugreeva explained as he approached the man behind the desk.

The man stood and Sugreeva wanted to cringe back at seeing just how large and built this man was. “Who’s asking?”

“I am, my name is Sugreeva and I am of Kiskinda Trading. I have been severely wronged, and I need Rama’s help.” Everyone who spoke of this Rama only spoke highly of him as if he were some god reincarnate. They also said that he believed in justice and doing what was right above all else. Sugreeva was prepared to pay any amount to have this man help him.

Watching him wearily, the man behind the desk simply pointed his chin in a direction as if telling him to follow, before he walked away. Sugreeva did just that and was led through the back of what was set up as a normal bookstore. He knew that there were probably distilleries hidden in here as well. The prohibition was in full swing, and anyone who conducted any sort of shady business was in the business of hooch as well.

The man knocked on a heavy door, and a voice answered behind it. “Yes, Lakshmana?”

The large man, known as Lakshmana opened the door, “You have a guest.” And with that he ushered Sugreeva in before closing the door and leaving.

The infamous Rama stood to greet him, dressed in a simple black waistcoat with a golden pocket watch chain hanging out.  He was not what Sugreeva had imagined, not as tall and broad as images of a dangerous man may represent. But something within him was frightening all in itself. “Yes, yes. Come in and tell me your problems.”

Rama seemed very to the point, and Sugreeva was glad for that. “I am here because I need your help. I am Sugreeva of Kiskinda Trading and I need help in taking my brother Vali out of the head position.”
One of Rama’s eyebrows rose, “Oh, and why is that? I am not in the business of putting myself into the family affairs. In what way have you been so wrong to want me to help you take care of your brother?”

Sugreeva was afraid of rejection, but he figured that since he was here he had nothing to lose. “I have been wronged in many ways. Two years ago, my brother Vali was caught up in an external deal that went wrong and was sent to the slammer. It was my job to have been there on lookout that day, but the members of our board made me stay because they didn’t feel right about the situation. As a result, my brother thought that I was the one who set him up in order to take over the company. So when he was released, he came after me. Vali told me that if he ever saw my face again that he would kill me on the spot. But while he has been in power and I have been away, our company had begun to crumble. He is getting bolder and bolder in his under the table deals, and I am afraid that he will get caught again and our business will go up in flames.” 

Listening patiently, Rama sat back in his chair. “And how can I help you? It sounds to me like it is nothing but a family spat and you are the only one who has been wronged.”

This was it; this was Rama about to reject him. “He took my wife,” Sugreeva muttered sadly. “I believe he is keeping her against her will. And I don’t believe that she is the only one in such a situation. His deals are very underhanded and he could be taking more hostages than just her.”

Rama is very softhearted when it comes to women. Someone had told Sugreeva when he had asked around for advice. He had been told that if he mentioned that helpless women were involved in the ordeal, then Rama would cave and pledge his loyalty to your side. And from the look on Rama’s face, the information seemed to be correct.

“I cannot believe that such a scumbag would take advantage of women like that. Women should be cherished and remain pure from such evil. I will help your cause in order to make sure that he does not taint any women, that beast.” Rama stood from the chair and grabbed a pencil and notepad. “Please, write down all of the details and I will join your fight against this Vali.”


Sugreeva remembered what someone else had told him. This mercenary can be played like a fiddle. He relies too much on what he believes is right and wrong, and will always seek justice. If you can make him purr, then he will be yours. And Sugreeva had definitely made him purr.

Image Information: Bugsy Siegel Mugshot; Web Source: Wikimedia Commons



Author's Note:
In The Ramayana, Rama and his crew travel to Kishkinda in their journey to find Sita. One of the monkeys, Hanuman, sees him and knows that he is a supreme individual and after talking to them, tells his king Sugreeva. Rama is told the story of Sugreeva and his fight with his brother Vali, with Sugreeva relating to Rama in the fact that his wife was stolen from him. He and his brother had been fighting because Vali believed that Sugreeva had turned against him and locked him in a cave, so he gets angry and beats him. Sugreeva requests Rama and Lakshmana’s aid in his fight against Vali so that he can have his life back to normal.

I wanted to tell the story of Rama taking Sugreeva's side against Vali in a new fashion. I saw the deal between the two of them to be the kind you would make with a mercenary, and for some reason I also got a mob-like feeling from the deal.


I made a few changes, such as the fact that Sugreeva is the one who tells his story and seeks out Rama. And of course I changed the setting of the story to be set in 1920s America. The Sugreeva in my story appealed to Rama’s soft spots in an attempt to receive help more so than he did in the story.

Bibliography:

The image is what I imagine as a standard mobster mugshot, it was found at Wikimedia Commons

Story retold from pages 90-95: 
Narayan, R. K. (1972) The Ramayana: A Shortened Modern Prose Version of the Indian Epic.

Tuesday, January 27, 2015

Week 3 Reading Diary B: The Great War

  •  My heart dropped when Hanuman thought he had seen Sita living lavishly in Lanka (page 121). I was relieved to find out as Hanuman did, that it was not in fact her, and that instead Sita was still fighting against Ravana because she loves Rama too much to submit to him (page 122).
  • Karma makes yet another appearance! Vibishana spared Hanuman’s life when Ravana wanted to kill him (page 123), and then when Vibishana seeks asylum with Rama, Hanmnan seeks to do the same, sparing Vibishana’s life (page 131).
  • Exile is such a common theme in this epic.
  • So is the bond (positive or negative) between brothers. 
  • I love how pretty much everyone Ravana talks to tells him that he is an idiot for handling the situation the way he did—by taking Sita while Rama and Lakshmana were alive. Even his brother Kumbakarna tells him so after he is awakened from his slumber (page 137). Of course, he was awoken only to be defeated by Rama in the battle (page 137).
  • You would think that Ravana would take the hint that his case was a lost cause when even the gods turned on him in support of Rama (page 142).
  • Man, that fight scene was long. Every other scene in the epic was straight to the point, but not the fight. 
  • Even after defeating his enemy, Rama second guesses his own honor when he believes he shot a retreating Ravana (page 147). Of course, that wasn’t the case. Even then, he tells everyone that they should think of Ravana with respect and honor and give him a proper funeral (page 147). Even after the man stole his wife and caused this huge war, Rama still treats him with respect. Man, that Rama.

  • Sita literally has a trial by fire to prove that she was loyal to Rama, what a brave woman (pages 148 and 149).


  • And of course, all’s well that ends well. The epic ends with Rama and Sita taking the thrones and living happily ever after.
Image Information: Sita in the Flames; Web Source: Wikimedia Commons

Monday, January 26, 2015

Week 3 Reading Diary A: Rama and the Monkeys

  • ·      I liked how the chapter started out with the author telling us a little bit of background on the chapter before he starts it off. I also liked that he begins explaining the animal races because I has been wondering when the monkeys and such would be explained and come into the story (page 90).
  • ·      I feel bad for Sugreeva, he just did whatever his advisors told him to do, and Vali punished him horribly. And now he is in the same position Rama is in, banished and without his wife (pages 92-94). 
  • ·      Of course Rama has his crazy archery ability and shot an arrow through not only seven massive tree trunks, but seven worlds and seas, and it returned to him (pages 94 and 95).
  • ·      I can tell why this chapter is deemed to be controversial with Rama taking revenge on Vali whom has done him no harm. I thought it was strange though, that he did not shoot him with the arrow until he had almost killed Sugreeva (pages 99 and 100).
  • ·      I love how karma was brought into the story. Rama thinks back to when he had treated Kooni unkindly when he’d been a child, and as a result he was punished for it by Kooni herself who’s actions led Rama to being banished (page 106).
  • ·      I felt myself growing angry at Sugreeva for not coming to Rama’s aid as he had promised, only to find out that he was lost in pleasures (pages 110 and 111). But of course, he wizened up and sent the army after all.
  • ·      Poor Sampathi having to find out that Jatayu had died as he did, though I was glad that he was able to help the search party, and that his wings grew back so that he could fly away again (page 119).
Image Information: Vali and Sugreeva's Fight; Web Source: Wikipedia.